Draft version 2.3
General Comments
With comments that are applicable for more than one slide: post the comment on the first slide where the comment is applicable, and give the numbers of the slides that are also affected by the comment. For comments for the whole reference model, post them on the first slide (X1)
Under Socially Sustainable, there is a phrase saying "What you can do to make it financially sustainable" - should probably be: "socially sustainable"
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