Draft version 2.3
General Comments
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Here we get a bit lost in the logic sequence of the slides - why not elaborate on Financial Sustainability, and only have an extra slide on Social Sustainability?
ReplyDeleteAlso the content of the slide seems to be about Education while we had the impression to be in a 'general' part.