Draft version 2.3
General Comments
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This page looks the first one in which the triangular logo is "used". Not having seen any explanation of what such logo means, one could wonder why only parts of the arrows are shown for the different roles. I suggest to include a short explanation of the meaning of this triangular logo.
ReplyDeleteNeed consistency for caps for titles throughout slide e.g. Programme Manager.
ReplyDeleteThe Project Initiator paragraph tense switches between singluar and plural when describing tasks.
"prioritizes" should be "prioritises".
ReplyDelete"gets" should be "get"
"stands by THE local community"
"A project manager also helps with seeking funding for a project"
If we are using (S)he throught the doc we need to be careful with her/his?